Posted by: lordkyler | July 30, 2011

Convergence – Part Eleven

This is the eleventh and final installment (extra long)  to the original Convergence chain story, currently slated to be completely overhauled. If you haven’t read the previous sections, I suggest you do so first.

As usual, my sections are in bold, his are in italic, and notes will follow.

6.4.3. 18:32

They stopped the missiles. So I ordered long-duration laser fire. This time we did move back. The enemy started to come out, thinking we were retreating. Then it came. A focused pillar of light so intense my light adjusting visor could barely compensate for it, and so wide it engulfed the entire building. Invisible heat waves bounced off the building, leaving crackling air in place of the building. After half a minute, the beam shut off as quickly as it began. Only a small metal cube was left at the bottom, shiny and obviously refractive enough to defy the laser. Probably separately shielded, too. Obviously something important, I concluded it was most likely a command station. I gave the order to ray it up. The cube slowly faded away, then flashed as it was shuttled back to the ship, to be put in an isolation chamber. Maybe it would have prisoners.

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Posted by: lordkyler | July 16, 2011

Convergence – Part Ten

Holy Cow, it’s the tenth installment of this story. In case you haven’t been following, this is the original chain story of Convergence, with me writing the story of one side, and him writing the other. Story got written, arguments got started, and some dumb stuff happened. We’re close to the end now, but we’ve still got a few more parts coming, and I’ll be working on an all new outline for this story soon, elevating it to the status of actual book.

As usual, sections I wrote are in bold, sections he wrote are italics, and there will be notes on each section at the bottom. Here we go.

6.4.3 17:69

One weapons factory was gone. At least it wasn’t a barracks. Oh well. I was manning the Plazma cannon which had been upgraded to use an assortment of missiles. The missiles had  been brought up here. We have about 2,000 missiles in this chamber alone. You can tell just how big this Plazma cannon was. It can hold up to fifty Nemhan missiles. But we kept the range of missiles open. So it could hold fifty assorted missiles. That would last us for awhile. Read More…

Posted by: lordkyler | July 2, 2011

DIY FPS?

So, somewhat in the vein of the last post, I’ve got another game idea, also involving stick figures, but for a rather different reason. You see, with something as simple as stick figures, this game has the potential to be modded by almost anyone into any type of game they like.

Allow me to explain. Read More…

Posted by: lordkyler | June 18, 2011

Just an Idea…

With the slew of MMORPG’s out there, I though it might be interesting if one took a more casual approach, something simple, something classic…

Side-scrolling. Yeah, there are a few out there, but that’s not all.

Stick figures. Read More…

Posted by: lordkyler | June 4, 2011

Convergence – Part Nine

Just like last week, we’ve got another part of the ongoing installments of the original Convergence story, part nine to be exact.

My sections are in bold, his are in italic. You know the drill by now, if you’ve read the previous entries in this series. Notes will follow, as usual.

6.4.3. 17:60

We now had the necessary adjustments made to the weapons. Specialty weapons for this particular purpose would be online in a matter of hours. There was no time to lose. We already knew of the structural weakness, but that was not convenient enough a flaw, as we had to get on-site to manage it. But now we had a positive weakness that could penetrate their shields.

We had found a paper detailing a part required for the shields to function. Our own developments had followed a similar path from the earlier shields we had left behind when we left, but they had, again, taken a different route somewhere down the development path. We had toyed with such designs, but passed them off as too unstable to function. They had apparently worked around this problem, where we had taken a different idea and developed them into our current shields.

But in bypassing the instability, they had opened up a new problem. The shields could be prompted back into imminent overload by special firing at strategic points in the dome. Calculating carefully, we could easily cause their domes to collapse, and the shield generators to explode with a highly potent radioactive blast. Also, we had come up with a method that would weaken the shield far more than regular straightforward blasts.

The shields allowed varieties of non-concentrated light to pass through it, such as sunlight. By beginning at a level below the threshold level, then increasing to above it, back and forth, we could use the strobe effect to greatly weaken their shields to the point where our blasts would have regular effect.

As a side note, we could blanket the entire shield area in concentrated light, causing the area to black out, and allow no external light sources to enter, which would have the bonus ability of completely destroying their huge solar generator plants, which provided power to ninety percent of their functions, including many military ones. And of course, if they weren’t shielded, we could just destroy them the good old way.

In less than an hour, Operation Prometheus would begin, stealing their fire, as the legend went, and shutting down their power generators. And soon, we would begin Operation Strobe, and obliterate their shields for good.

-Holdar Supremacy report

6.4.3. 17:62

The shield was being adjusted. The weakness would hopefully be fixed before the Supremacy got to one of our buildings. We had put up another shield that didn’t have the same weakness. They would have to get new weapons. By then, the shields would be fixed. No new weapons would be able to get through this. The sooner the better. I was one of the only people in the field that knew the workings of a shield. We started only 3 minutes ago. We had made some progress. The hard part would be to fix the main flaw. We would have to turn it down to 3% capacity. So we did. When the outer shield was up, we would get the shield done within the hour. The Supremacy would be unable to do anything about it.

-Major Morvagim

6.4.3. 17:64

There was a scurry of activity to every shielded building in the Kassis planet. They carried large crates, presumably with new She’esh components. Obviously they were switching to more conventional shields. That was fine with us. We knew how to take them down too. They must have discovered our access of the database, and realized we might have discovered the weakness.

Oh, well. It was far too late. For them. We were finally pulling in a fairly large percentage of the fleet, about five hundred ships. All of them heavy fire, with newly reprogrammed laser fire. All of them were under heavy escort, which their fighter squadrons could not hope to reduce below working standards without getting their entire fleet demolished. We had already begun the draining of their power generators. Satellite systems were now sending down huge beams of light, and the shields, true to design, were now blotting out all incoming light.

With a war on, their energy reserves could not last more than a few days without rationing, which would put a severe crimp in their operations. The huge lasers were turned down enough to avoid major power drain on our part, but still had plenty of firepower to destroy the panels if the shields ever dropped. Any second now, the fleet would begin its first run, and even if they accomplished nothing more than causing their shields to eat up more power, it was worth it. And we expected to cause far more damage than that. The first strike would begin in approximately one minute. And counting…

A.C. Telyon

6.4.3. 17:65

The Supremacy was starting an attack run. They were fools. They were wrong to think they could drain our shields. They could never hope to drain them. We could switch the power sources every time they were almost out of power, if the shields weren’t done by then. We were almost done with the shields. Any moment now, the signal would hopefully come and they would turn off the outer shield, and see how the main shield holds. A green light came on the communicator.

“That’s the signal. Turn off the outer shield on my command!”

You had to have precise timing to pull this off. The outer shield had to be turned off before the main shield could be turned on. And to prevent the Supremacy from hitting us while the shields were off… that required exact timing.

There appeared to be a certain order that they attacked in. One ship would fire 50 laser bursts, then pull away, while another ship took it’s place. It had to be done when the ships were switching places. Exactly 2 seconds to switch shields. The laser fire stopped.

“Now!”

The outer shield turned off, and the main shield turned on. Just as the next ship started firing. That is talent. That’s why I  am such a good pilot. The shield would only hold for days under this pressure, but power sources were replaceable. It was a spectacular sight, the lasers against the shield. If we lived through this war, I would remember that sight.

-Major Morvagim

6.4.3.  17:65

They had switched off their newly exploited shields, only to be replaced with regular shields, just as our pilots were getting in their first trial runs. Oh, well. We had plenty of experience with regular shields. No one can become as proficient as we are at war and not know how to deplete them. They must be very smug right now, I thought. Let’s wipe those grins off their arrogant faces.

I was commanding the Lhornaya, a ship loaded with heavy implements and bombs. Perfect for draining shields. I started sending down the Lattice missiles. These were much larger, much more competent versions of the smaller Nimbi missiles. These weighed well over a ton each. The Lattices used nuclear power, in comparison to most other energy weapons. More unstable, a bit shorter explosion time, but energy that was hard to counter. We also had various compounds to help stabilize, increase, and prolong its force.  These would send out the pressuring strands with a light that made the Nimbi look dimmer than a low wattage bulb. In addition, they had Miniature Angelflames, known as Holy Torches, mounted around the body, and when the shield dropped, they would slam into whatever the shield used to be protecting.

I, along with several of my fellow pilots proceeded to drop several Lattices. I looked down, through the transparent floor in the bombing bay, and watched the missile slide away, disappearing from sight miles away, towards the giant shield protecting the weapons production factory that made all their military grade lasers. Then it struck. Flashing across like a reflection in a pond, the vivid green began straining, with the streams of draining energy moving across the shield like lightning, moving slowly, sliding around, then snapping into another randomly determined pattern. The greenish shields glowed brighter, fringing into gold at the contact point. Then two more struck. The shield began to lose opacity, and I could see the fountains of light where the shield’s broadcasters were sending it up. Then the whole thing collapsed in a shower of sparks.

Similar developments were occurring at a few other locations across the globe, and we would soon be taking others down. The Torches suddenly lit up, illuminating the distant landscape with fiery light, only to give way to actual fire as they struck. Buildings were coming down. Our mission was accomplished here. We would move to the next location. Time for the ground crews to mop up. In fact, as we headed to our next target, I could see the immensely powerful Colossus Tanks and Behemoth Land ships moving in, trailing thousands of soldiers behind them, even now beginning to sweep into the enemy occupations.

-Boldaer Qhinil, Captain, H.S. Lhornaya

[Notes] First section: The shield weakness arose from a “conversation” between me and Josh over his so-callled “invincible” shield. I asked if it let light in, and he said, yes, but it blocks out dangerous levels of light. Thus, by beaming down concentrated light towards their solar farms, it will block out their power.Also, I made another reference to Earth culture, in Prometheus. I need to stop doing that, they’re not from earth…

Second section: Blah blah blah we’re invincible blah blah blah for some reason a pilot with the rank of major is one of the only people who knows about our shield technology blah blah blah.

Third section:  I told him his people would obviously use some sort of environmentally stable energy source, and aside from wind and solar, he could not think of a single other one, so he was forced to lose his solar plants. I specifically didn’t tell him about thermal energy from the planet core, though, heh heh heh. Energy, baby, it’s the currency and ammo for the war of the future.

Fourth section: “They were fools. They were wrong to think they could drain our shields. They could never hope to drain them. We could switch the power sources every time they were almost out of power.” No you can’t no you can’t no you can’t! My plan is foolproof! “The outer shield turned off, and the main shield turned on. Just as the next ship started firing. That is talent. That’s why I  am such a good pilot.” Because you can push buttons on time?

Fifth section: I included a fifth section because I wanted to wrap up this whole stupid “War of the Shields” thing. Anyway, we’re now getting into the full-scale invasion, and things get pretty dumb…

Posted by: lordkyler | May 21, 2011

Convergence – Part Eight

Part eight of the ongoing installments of the original Convergence story, returning briefly to the battle in the skies.

My sections are in bold, his are in italic. You know the drill by now. If you don’t, read the previous entries in this series. Notes will follow.

6.4.3. 17:08

The holardram had destroyed our main Barracks! I was getting very annoyed. My name is Private Yamorthen Negber of the Telar squad. The Holdar Supremacy was getting too bitter. It was a bit past dawn. I had taken a fighter to take out a couple of the ships. I had just gotten past the enemy buildings when I saw the Telyon. I opened fire. The shields were kind of strong, but I fired enough shots to deplete the shields. My own shields were almost gone. I fired 3 missiles. They took out the starboard engine and left a big hole in the hull. I smiled. Now that was a sight that Major Morvagim would have loved to see. Of course I would tell him about it later. Read More…

Posted by: lordkyler | May 7, 2011

Convergence – Part Seven

Welcome to another installment of the competitive chain story that inspired Convergence as it now stands. Please read the previous sections first.

In today’s section, we’ll meet some different viewpoint characters, taking the battle to the ground. As usual, sections that were written by me are in bold, sections written by my brother are in italics. Enjoy.

6.4.3. 16:65

So, the fools thought they took down the communications building. Their Thunderer bombs had drained the shield a small amount. These new shields were so strong. And it’s amazing what you can do with holograms these days. To our eyes, it looked like the building was blown to smithereens. Not so. Even if the shields hadn’t been able to withstand the thunderer bombs, the building would have been able to withstand 3 or 4 of them. As the ship that had been following us left, we made our way to the compound. Read More…

Posted by: lordkyler | April 23, 2011

Superheroes – The Original Draft

So, in light of all the old writing from Convergence, (which will resume in a couple of weeks,) and the overhaul I’m currently working on for this story, I figured I’d share the original with you. (Well, the first draft worth anything, anyway.)

This is the original draft, the first story ever done with these characters, and as I’ve said, it’s not nearly as developed as it should be, although it has a sweet prison escape, I’ll tell you what. That makes up for a lot.

STILL, it is being overhauled right now, so that hopefully one day I’ll be able to point you to a finished book or amazing characters and say, “here, superheroes! Enjoy! Sequel underway!” presumably followed by adoration and demands that I get it published.

So, anyway, here’s the first draft in it’s entirety. Enjoy.

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Posted by: lordkyler | April 2, 2011

Collaborative Chain Comic – Awesome? Crazy? You Decide!

So, once upon a time, me and my brother decided to draw a comic just for fun, each of us doing just a panel or two at a time, and sticking in as many pop-culture icons as feasibly possible. It was super crazy, kind of awesome, and pretty confusing. I’m posting them here in the hopes they’ll entertain, but you’ll probably want to see full view just to make sure you can read the handwriting. (not too great for either of us.) Also, be aware that the scanner for some reason cut off just a bit of one side, but you should hopefully be able to surmise any missing text.

So, here goes!

The cover to the crazy amazing choose-your-own-adjective comic. That bottom right space is left blank because I really honestly couldn't think of any more motifs to include. Top left is the heads of numerous superheroes, in stick-figure form. Please nobody sue me for the copious superhero usage in this comic.

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Posted by: lordkyler | March 19, 2011

Convergence – Part Six

Part six of the original chain story that started Convergence.

As usual, sections written by me are in bold, sections written by my brother are in italics, and notes are available at the end.

6.4.3. 16:53

The surrender button was my only hope of stopping the 9 Angelflames. So I had pushed it and the missiles halted in midair. We waited for a communications link to be established. When the link came through, I stated my terms.

“I am Major Hethim Morvagim, of the ASMF. I wish to negotiate my terms of surrender.”

“This is Captain Reddis Phinirri of the Holdar Supremacy. You may state your terms.”

“I wish to be let free, and ask that you not fire on my ship again. As you probably know, I have destroyed the hangar.” Read More…

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