Kyler’s Tale – Chapter 4 (and 5!)

December 26, 2009

[Merry Non-Denominational Mid-December Holiday! Today, you get TWO chapters! At the same time! And one of them has a fight with a bear! Truly, the best holiday gifts are those that involve bear fights. Anyway...]

Chapter Four

After he sent her body down the stream, He turned to his dog.

His mind flashed back to the trial. His father had looked at him, like he would rather kill himself than do this. “Son, you have been accused of murdering your mothers brother, The Duke of Chervil. How do you plead?”

“Not guilty” Kyler said. His father nodded. Tears were forming in the corners of his eyes.

“He was found dead, with an arrow in his back. Peasants report you were practicing archery while visiting your uncle yesterday. Also, the guards checked your quiver. You are missing an arrow. Son, answer me truthfully, Did you kill him? Was it an accident?” He asked, almost pleadingly

“No, father, I did not.” he stated fervently

“Would you explain your missing arrow?”

“It accidentally went over the wall, I looked for it, but it must have landed in the moat.”

“Is it true that you had an argument with your uncle?”

“ Yes father, but it was nothing.” His father fought to keep his voice from cracking. “ The jury may now consult” As the seven chosen members of the jury went back to the discussion pavilion, his father looked at him. That look said many things . Kyler could tell exactly what it meant. The look said “I think you are innocent, but your uncle was popular, and, through the power which I have, will be forced to punish you for something I know you did not do. I’m sorry, son.” The look only lasted a few seconds, but it was enough. Kyler forgave him. He had already accepted his fate. The jury came out of their pavilion. the spokesman stepped forward. “We find him: Guilty. It is now up to the master of the court to decide his fate.” For this capital crime, there were only two punishments, execution, or exile. His father hesitated for a split second. He chose exile.

He snapped back to the future. In a few hours, they reached the pass. As he rode through the high rock cliffs, he remembered how much he hated to come through here. It looked to him like the cliffs would tumble down any second. But, once again, nothing happened. He entered the valley. On his left, there was a waterfall, coming from an underground spring. Kyler saw a flash, and recognized it as the golden edging of the chariot. He rode a little faster. In a few minutes, he reached the edge of the small lake where the water collected before rushing off into the bigger lake.

He looked around for Sophus. He couldn’t see him, even though the horses were there, taking a long drink. He and the dog joined them. What if Sophus had run off? No, if Sophus had run off, he would have taken the horse and chariot. Still, he should have been more cautious. If his father or his tutor could have seen him last night, he would have been in for a lecture.

As he looked up from his drink, he saw Gwyane in the reflection of the lake. He looked up. Sure enough, There was Gwyane. When he dived for his prey, he could find Sophus, who was undoubtedly hunting with him. He waited, and rested. Not many animals would be out in the heat of midday. so he watched Gwyane; thinking over Sophus and last nights events. Gwyane dived. Kyler stood up as best he could with his injured arm. and hurried over. The dog decided to stay and guard the camp. This time Gwyane was perched on a large squirrel, as he saw when he forced his way through the bushes. He waited for Sophus. He did not have to wait long. The bushes began to rustle. As Sophus burst through, Kyler sprang up, startled. Sophus had quite a few scars, on his face, his neck, his arms, and his legs. This caused a very different appearance than what he had expected. He didn’t see them earlier because of the dim fire light and the near pitch black of the side path they had used the other night. Kyler, still a little unsettled, forced himself to calm down. As he had previously noted, Sophus could have killed him already, and profited more than if he had waited. So Kyler walked with him back to the lake. Sophus gathered a few plants on the way. Kyler assumed they were for his wounds. When he got back to camp he found he was right. None of the plants were poisonous, as he had learned from his father when he taught him to survive. He began to trust Sophus a little more. As Sophus bound his arm, He began to tell of his past.

“ I was born in a country far south of here. When I was young, We left our home and farm. I have forgotten why. We traveled northward. Eventually, we reached Genar, which you know is a part of Carsac, is not so far from here. There, we resettled, and lived a somewhat hard, but wonderful life. Then, when I was nine or ten, our family was attacked by bandits. By some strange twist of fate, they spared me and took me as a robber apprentice. Calm down; you’re only making this harder,” he said sharply as Kyler began to reach for his sword. Kyler forced himself to stay calm and think logically again.

“That’s better. Of course, I did not not join them willingly, but after being starved and beaten, much like those wolves, I finally accepted. After being forced to do many horrible things to other people, which I will not burden you with, my defenses were lowered. I was; desensitized to it all. Eventually the mentality sunk in, and I became robber, thief and bandit. I became quite good with a throwing knife, and the long dagger, which I do not have anymore. It was a shoddy piece of blacksmithing. Anyway, to get back to the story, after having lived in the woods so long I became a good hunter and learned how to heal myself with the native plants.

“This continued until we robbed a settlement to the southeast of Embearn, and I found myself doing to someone else what had happened to me, many years ago. So I left, leaving my long knife in the heart of of the lead robber. I knew it did not make things right, but it helped. I had been living in the woods for about five years before I met you. The robbers were always after me, of course, but I managed to elude them. Until last night, that is. They almost got me that time. They were after you too, but that was just a bonus. I am indebted to you for saving my life.” Sophus had finished the bandaging by that time, and was sitting on a log, relating his story, and, as he finished, stood up and swept into a bow. Kyler was surprised, and pleased.

He did not feel he had to worry about Sophus anymore, His story sounded plausible, and it fit the events, so far as he knew. There had been a raid on a village in that direction, and the leader had been killed, but they didn’t know who had done it. And additionally, the bandits had been less active the past few years, Searching for Sophus, as he now knew. He believed Sophus’ story. He stood up. “And, unless you have forgotten, You saved my life from that thief last night” and with that, Kyler also swept into a bow.

“So we’re even?” asked Sophus.

“Yes, I guess so.” Kyler replied.

“So be it” Sophus said, swinging into the saddle of Swift. “ with that arm, you should probably ride in the chariot.”

Kyler did. They rode until evening.

[How about all that background exposition, huh? So apparently I noticed the problem with Kyler trusting Sophus when I was still writing this, and decided to just keep going with it instead of re-writing the last chapter. Whatever, here comes the bear fight. ]

Chapter Five

They camped not more than a stones throw from the lake. Kyler chose to use some supplies for dinner, and smoke the squirrels meat, instead. He ate ravenously. After the previous days ordeals, he was famished. After they had finished their meal, they outlined the next days plans.

“We should be out of the kingdom of Carsac in a few more days,” Sophus noted.

“I’m not sure we have supplies for the next couple of days, even with Gwyane”

“Who’s Gwyane?”

“The falcon.”

“Oh. Anyway, you’re right, Our food won’t last that long.”

“Do we dare stop to hunt? There will be soldiers following us soon to make sure we left the country.”

“What choice do we have?”

“You’re right, any good with a bow and arrow?”

“No.”

“I guess I’ll have to hunt with the bow, and you can hunt with Gwyane. I’ll take first watch.”

Sophus laid down. Kyler stared into the darkness. They traded posts through the night, but nothing happened. The next morning Sophus took Gwyane to hunt by the lake. Kyler got a bow and arrow and started going through the woods. These woods, he knew, were not owned by anyone. Almost everyone in the valley had to do some hunting or cut some wood to survive. If the government tried to take over the forest, there was automatically a revolt. It had happened before. It would probably happen again. He stalked silently through the forest. He found a game trail, made by a large animal in the hard packed earth and roots that abounded all across the ground, in complex and intricate patterns. Because of this type of ground, he could not tell what type of animal had made this trail, only that it was fairly large. He followed it. This was the part he was good at. Making no noise, he seemed to glide across the forest floor. Up ahead, he saw an animal.  It rose. It was a bear! Kyler tried frantically to hide, but it was too late. It had already seen or heard him. He did his best to keep from screaming. All of the trees had no low-lying branches. It wouldn’t do him any good anyway. even though his arm was much better, he wouldn’t be able to climb a tree. The bear could probably climb, anyway. He whistled, not a high shrill whistle like he had used to call Swift, But a long, strong whistle, used to call William. Fortunately, the spaces between the trees were wide enough to get a chariot through. If he could survive that long.

He pulled an arrow out of his quiver and nocked it. The bear, having heard the whistle, charged. Kyler pulled, and fired. It took it through the eye. The bear slowed, but even after that, did not stop. Kyler waited, and when the bear was no more than six inches away, He jumped to the blind side of the bear. The bear, surprised, and going to fast to stop in time, ran into a tree. Roaring his anger, he searched for his future victim. Kyler was  downwind of the bear. The bear shouldn’t be able to smell him. It couldn’t. Circling around, It realized it couldn’t see him either. “That,” whispered Kyler to himself, “was far too close” He peered anxiously towards the camp, searching for William. He could sort of see him through the trees, but it would be about five more minutes until he got there. The bear, having learned he could not see or smell his elusive quarry, listened for him. His small  triangular ears detected heavy breathing. He snuck up as good as he could. Kyler heard him coming. He took a very risky chance. Whirling out from behind the tree, he plunged his skinning knife into the beast’s back. While it did not kill him, it did injure it. The bear was confused. What had happened? None of his other prey retaliated. What was this strange hurting thing in his back? He tried to roll over, to rub it off, but it pressed in even deeper. He growled his frustration. Then he saw his prey. It was standing next to something that looked to him, like a deer without horns. A very large deer without horns. It looked like it tasted good. He charged. Kyler leaped into the chariot, grabbed a spear, and charged at the bear. They would meet somewhere in a small clearing.

At the last few seconds before they collided, Kyler swerved the chariot. The bear, in its simplicity, did not comprehend what happened, and kept going straight ahead. Then a vicious spear pierced the thick folds of his skin. It missed the heart, but caused a tremendous amount of pain. The beast was thinking things like, “I can’t lose, I’ll get him this time. That hurts. I won’t give up.’ Through his one remaining eye, he saw the human dismount. Kyler selected a spear. It was a long spear with a hooked end. The bear charged. By this time, the tactic of moving just before colliding had sunk in. The brute charged, not roaring or even attacking, his strategy was: Charge until the the human moves, then turn and attack. He stuck to his strategy, even when the human did nothing, even when the spear went straight through him, and even when he ran into a tree again after the human let go of the spear. He even stuck to his strategy when he died. He was still sticking to his strategy wherever he went after that.  Any moment now he would eat, thought the bear, any moment…

[A-yup. First person Bear visualization, right there. So anyway, this could definitely use a re-write, but it was pretty good for my age, I must say. Still more chapters to come]


Kyler’s Tale – Chapter 3

December 19, 2009

Chapter Three

The wolves circled closer. In desperation, Kyler threw his sword. It did not enter the heart, but slammed lengthwise across the creature’s face. Bleeding profusely, it whimpered away, trying to lick its own wounds. The last wolf came closer. Once it saw that Kyler did not attack right away, it became confident. It knew it had him. Kyler knew it too.

The wolf crouched, calculating the jump, and leapt for his throat. Instinctively, Kyler threw up his arm. The wolf latched on, clinging to his arm like a leech, reveling in the taste of blood. Kyler lifted the wolf and slammed it into a nearby pine tree with all his remaining strength. He had thought this wolf would give up after being slammed into a tree so brutally, but she had gotten the taste of blood, and was in a near-frenzy. She had been starved for so long, she was desperate. She leaped again, so forcefully she knocked him down. He could feel her weight on his chest. Kyler closed his eyes, awaiting the end. But nothing happened; in fact the weight lifted off of him. He heard growling and snarling to his left. Opening his eyes and turning towards the sound, he was surprised.

It was his dog! Sophus must have found him in the chariot and sent him back to help! His dog had several advantages over the wolf, such as a spiked collar, being was less winded, and, most importantly, he had not been slammed into a tree.

They leapt at almost the same time, and collided in midair, then they collapsed to the ground, a snarling, angry ball. Twisting and writhing they both battled for a hold on each other’ necks. Finally, the wolf got a hold on his dog’s neck, but a split second later released it, whimpering and snarling at the same time. The spiked collar worked well.

Kyler ran for his sword. Grabbing it with his left hand, he approached the scene of the carnage, and waited for an opening. Suddenly they leapt apart. The sun was above the horizon now, and in the wolf’s eyes. Kyler looked at it. It was so thin you could see its ribs, and blood dripped from her mouth, foreleg and side. The female was also covered with dirt, and torn foliage stuck to her blood. It was pitiful. Kyler hesitated. The wolf leapt again, this time at him. Before his dog could step in, Kyler clubbed it with the pommel of his sword. She crumpled to the ground, unconscious. He looked at her pitiful frame, and knew that when she woke, cruelly treated by the bandits. So he did her a favor. She never woke up.

[Wow, that's almost dark, like Old Yeller if you only watched the part where he gets shot. In other news, never underestimate the value of not being slammed into a tree. More chapters coming.]


Kyler’s Tale – Continued

December 12, 2009

[Chapter 2. Things progress rather rapidly, as then, and to a lesser degree now, I paced things rather quickly. Except fight scenes. Those, of course, must be told in full detail.]

Chapter Two

Later on, the rain cleared up. As he rode he tried to form a plan. He had always been a thinker. First, he had to leave to the lands south. Once there, he could think, plan, and prepare. Yes, he admitted to himself, it was a little obvious, but it gave him a priority. He liked to have his goals outlined.

He dismounted. Taking Gwyane out of his cage, he unhooded him. His black bands contrasted startlingly with his whitish-gray plumage, which camouflaged him well against the clouds. Kyler released Gwyane. Hopefully he would find something to eat. Meanwhile, Kyler unlatched the chariot and tethered the two horses to a tree, leaving them to graze. Just then, Gwyane dived. Kyler hurried over. As he entered the small clearing, he saw Gwyane perched on a rabbit- his most recent kill. Giving the falcon the liver of his prey, he walked back to camp. Rummaging through his supplies he found a pot and some salt. He made a kind of stew [cooking had never been his strong point (although he did pretty well, having had virtually no education about cooking)] and ate. As the night grew dark, he stared past the fire into the blackness, pondering his fate. The horses were asleep, and so was the falcon. The dog was finishing the leftovers. Suddenly, a shape stepped into the light. Startled, Kyler fumblingly groped for his sword. Before he could draw it, the stranger held up his hands. “A word, kind sir?” Kyler stopped, hand on the hilt of his sword. “Greetings, traveler,” said the stranger, “could you spare a crust for a hungry old man?”

Kyler reached for a loaf of bread he had gotten from the kitchen of the castle before he left.

He seemed to instinctively trust the stranger, but was a little wary. and put his shield in front of him, for some safety, even though the man looked harmless. Still… Handing him the bread, he asked the stranger’s name. “Sophus. and yours?” He hadn’t heard of any villains named Sophus. He told him his name. Sophus sputtered. As soon as he settled down he began to ask questions.

“YOU MEAN THE SON OF THE DUKE OF EMBEARN!? WHAT ARE YOU DOING OUT HERE!? IT’S DANGEROUS! THERE ARE THIEVES AND-” Here he was stopped by a hand rather forcefully placed across his mouth.

“All the more reason to keep quiet, Hmm?”

“Mmmhhmm hhmm hm hmm.” The hand was released. “All right,” he said forcing his voice down to a whisper. “ But why are you out here?” Kyler unfolded his tale. At the end of the narrative, Sophus contemplated Kyler’s predicament.

“It sounds to me like you are in need of assistance.”

“That would be helpful,” he admitted. “ but what can you do to help?” Just then, a knife whizzed past his head, and something heavy fell on him. He shoved it off. He saw a grizzled, burly man with a knife through his throat. Sophus leaned over and calmly drew his knife out.

“Quite a bit, but not now. First we need sleep.” Kyler stared. “Don’t get up, He’s a loner, or else he wouldn’t.” Kyler thought about it. It made sense. And, he knew Sophus could easily have killed him then. Sophus cleaned off his knife while Kyler thought. He let Sophus take first watch. Kyler fell asleep.

He was rudely awoken half an hour later. “Come on, we need to move” said Sophus urgently. Without asking questions, Kyler got ready. In less than five minutes, they were ready to go. “Follow me.” Sophus whispered.

They rode south in the darkness. After they had ridden about two miles Sophus started to speak. “Bandits,” he remarked. Kyler nodded, he had thought as much. Suddenly, in the darkness he heard a growl, and a hissing noise that sounded suspiciously like a knife being thrown. Again. Sophus was clearly skilled. Someone or something gave a final death gurgle and died. Sophus dismounted, took one look, yanked his knife out of the thing’s throat, and mounted again. Quite calmly he stated, “Now it is time to run for our lives”

Kyler spurred the courser onward, deciding better safe than sorry. Sophus leapt into the chariot and grabbed the reins. They surged forward. “What- was- that-?” Kyler asked pantingly, trying to speak over the thundering of the horses and the chariot. “A wolf,”he replied. “The bandits and thieves capture, beat, train and starve them. They release them in packs, and they are quite deadly.” “Oh,” said Kyler and tried to ride faster. He was surprisingly calm. Suddenly, out of the bushes, a small group of wolves appeared. But by this time the horses were going to fast to stop. The courser (whose name was Swift) plowed right through the first wolf. He heard it whimper in pain, then heard the bushes rustle as it dived back. The chariot slammed into two more. They ran away with their tails between their legs, howling in self-pity. The remaining wolves loped after them. They moved surprisingly fast. Soon they would catch up.

Dawn started to appear on the horizon. The darkness was grayer now. Sophus shouted to him. “ You have the faster horse: Try to lead them away; I’ll meet with you at the falls!”

Kyler shouted back. “All right, but hurry up!” Turning quickly, and drawing his sword, he charged back through the remaining pack. The wolves, surprised by this maneuver, promptly sat down, skidding a bit on their rumps. Kyler clouted one on the head with the pommel of his sword. There were now only two wolves left. As Kyler started to turn again, the horse realized what they were about to do, and turned the other way. This, combined with Kyler leaning to the left- into the curve- threw him off. Kyler knew that Swift would return, but far too late.

[YES I KNOW HE SHOULDN'T HAVE TRUSTED SOPHUS SO QUICKLY, JUST ROLL WITH IT. Thank you.]


Kyler’s Tale – Old Writing

December 5, 2009

Several years ago, I started a story that was not-quite-fantasy. It took place in a medieval setting, and a world separate from ours, but with no magic or other common fantasy elements. It dropped off before progressing more than a few chapters, but still had potential. I may someday revisit this, but for now, here is chapter one of the original, written when I was around 14. (other chapters to follow)

[working title was Exodus, for lack of a better name. Exile would have been more appropriate]

Prologue [/setting and exposition]

In the year 650, on the world Auth, Kyler was born. He was the fifth son of the duke of Embearn, a far northern county in the far northern kingdom of Carsac. When he was ten years old, his education began. He learned from his father to ride, hunt, fight, and survive. His father always insisted on teaching his children himself. “No teacher better than their father,” He would say in his deep gruff voice. Often, under his breath he would add, “None that would come up here, anyway.” From his mother he learned to read and write. From his tutor he learned politics, diplomacy, and strategy. He was sturdily built, and tall. With his noble face, he was an inspiring sight, who men looked to naturally for leadership. He was a good leader, but he did not seek power or leadership, unlike his brothers and sister.

On his 17th birthday, he was in his quarters when the soldiers brought him to his father’s court. His uncle had been murdered, and all evidence pointed to Kyler. He was innocent, but he could not clear his name. The only thing that kept him from execution was being the son of the Duke. His mother burst into tears as his sentence was read: Exile.

Chapter One

He was wet. He slogged through the mud towards the stables, his mind reeling at the events which had occurred. At the stable door, He hesitated, undecided . The horse master stared at him malignantly. Avoiding his gaze, he went to his horses. He had two; a huge and heavy war horse, or destrier, and a light but fast courser. He attached his chariot, last year’s birthday gift, to William, the destrier, and loaded his few belongings, weapons, armor, and supplies into it. He saddled up his courser and rode out of the stables. His next stops were the mews to get his gyrfalcon, Gwyane, and then the kennels to get his dog. He hadn’t named the dog yet – nothing fit.

He then rode to the gatehouse, and saw his mother, eyes red and bleary. She looked determined. Kyler guessed his mother had reached some decision.

She looked at him and said “Son, I want you to know that I believe that you are innocent. Your uncle was close to me and I would like him to rest in peace, knowing that his killer was justly dealt with. Go now, my son, I love you.” As he rode to the south, He looked back to his mother and waved. Still sobbing, she waved back. As he rode on, his mother may not have noticed, but not all the water on his face was from the rain.

[The first chapter here is short, but they get longer. I sure gave him a heck of a lot of equipment, but hey, I was young, it was cool, why not? Also, the remaining chapters will be released weekly, then return to every other week.]


Superheroes – Nelson Rydgis

November 21, 2009

Nelson Rydgis is one of the major villians in the story. One thing that generally seems unrealistic to me is where the average or morally dubious guy somehow turns evil because he has powers. I realize that a some of people probably would start committing crimes if there were to suddenly acquire power. However, most people probably would not. After all, a gun could give them the same leverage that powers might, and firearms are much easier to come by. So, barring insanity, it’s more likely a villain would already be a bad guy before gaining powers. Read the rest of this entry »


Some Illustration via Photoshop

November 7, 2009

Just thought I’d share some of my favorite Photoshop work. Read the rest of this entry »


Animoids – Jane Castello

October 24, 2009

Jane Castello is a the second member of the Animoids corp to gain morphing powers, and the first to achieve them on purpose. Read the rest of this entry »


Creatures of Lithra

October 10, 2009

Previously, I posted about the serial fantasy story I’m working on with my brother. It is up and running, with mostly regular updates. [here]

In the world of the story, there are several races. Specifically, the Crossbred, the results of men mixed with various animals. I created some concept art for them, which I will showcase here. Each drawing was created by creating the basic pose in MakeHuman, adding a photo reference for the animal portion, then tracing and shading the image in Photoshop. The artistic style varies, but my “excuse” is that they were “drawn by different artists” in the “book” these are taken from. *Ahem* Anyway, check these out.

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Update 10-02-09

October 3, 2009

Hello, all of my like, one readers. Wow, what mighty influence I wield. Anyway, if you see this, it’s just to let you know that I’m pretty busy, but there will still be a post here every other Saturday. (Ambitious, eh?)

Also, the fantasy serial I co-author is updating every saturday, so you can check that out. New pages will be added occasionally.

Enjoy!


Convergence – Holdar Shuttle

September 26, 2009

This is the Holdar shuttlecraft, a small two man ship, not very maneuverable, and somewhat slow, but highly reliable and excellent defenses.

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